These phrases can be found in the majority of sales scripts I read. I’ve read them so often I don’t believe the meaning of the words anymore and I wonder if the audience they’re intended for does, either.
Article originally posted on Medium.com
Asa voiceover artist, I sometimes feel like I get an inside scoop on the future of products and ideas. Often, my participation is the last piece of a promotional/informational puzzle — and the scripts I receive have been in the pipeline for months, and in some cases, even years...
which makes it all the more annoying that we haven’t collectively, as a society, come up with better language to sell our products and ideas. I mean…someone call Corporate Erin. We can do better than this.
“We harness the power of…..” usually followed by technology, science, or connectivity.
“…driving change….”
“We champion growth…”
“We are architects of transformation”.
“We are custodians of authenticity.” Hmm.
“…transcends boundaries…”
“Together, we…” if you say “are stronger”, I’m gonna barf.
“…fueled by a passion for…”
“We elevate…”
“…relentless pursuit of…”
“…break down barriers…”
“…united by a passion for…”
“…empowering our clients…”
“…crafting products that…”
Is it me, or are these all starting to sound a little too AI…?
Which are your personal favorites? An even better question - how could we say all of these things differently?