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Writer's pictureJaren The Voiceover

14 Things I Never Want To Read In Sales Copy Again.

These phrases can be found in the majority of sales scripts I read. I’ve read them so often I don’t believe the meaning of the words anymore and I wonder if the audience they’re intended for does, either.


Article originally posted on Medium.com

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Asa voiceover artist, I sometimes feel like I get an inside scoop on the future of products and ideas. Often, my participation is the last piece of a promotional/informational puzzle — and the scripts I receive have been in the pipeline for months, and in some cases, even years...

which makes it all the more annoying that we haven’t collectively, as a society, come up with better language to sell our products and ideas. I mean…someone call Corporate Erin. We can do better than this.


  • “We harness the power of…..” usually followed by technology, science, or connectivity.

  • “…driving change….”

  • “We champion growth…”

  • “We are architects of transformation”.

  • “We are custodians of authenticity.” Hmm.

  • “…transcends boundaries…”

  • “Together, we…” if you say “are stronger”, I’m gonna barf.

  • “…fueled by a passion for…”

  • “We elevate…”

  • “…relentless pursuit of…”

  • “…break down barriers…”

  • “…united by a passion for…”

  • “…empowering our clients…”

  • “…crafting products that…”


Is it me, or are these all starting to sound a little too AI…?


Which are your personal favorites? An even better question - how could we say all of these things differently?

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